Hi, i started about a year ago to photograph products, and i working hard to build a nice portifolio and improve my work.
As many of you, always after doing some photo, i love her like if was the best photo EVER, but i know that i can do way better, but its easier to see mistakes or know how to improve, when i get some thougts made by other photographers, so please, help me to improve! :D
I like your concept, the pattern of the bands and all that, only thing I would say is to keep your band clean without sand, and align the watch face to frame center. While your light is fine, I would say that it works a bit like under-lighting at the moment, maybe placing the light the opposite side would work a little better, having the shadows fall down instead of up. On the other hand, the way the shadow falls in the watch face might be better like you have it, so it's about choices.
Good work.
I think the sand looks like damp protein powder so i would try to source a better looking sand for my next image:) I like the concept but i would also light it from the other side (up -> down)
For me it all works well except the sand. Unless it was a rugged sports watch the last thing I want is for my watch to be on/in sand that can scratch the case/glass. Replace the sand with something else and I think it's a winner.