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Porsche 911 GT3

Shot inside a hangar on a retired marine corp air base.

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6 Comments

Nice car! (my understatement for the day!)
IMO The first thing needed is to crop all of the sky out. The blue color does not go well with the earthy tones of the interior and monotone of the car. Highly distracting. Second thing is to eith crop from the left or reduce greatly the highlights on that door in the back ground in front of the car. Nearly impossible to focus long on the car without the eye jumping over to the bright vertical area. So in short it needs a good cropping. the IQ is excellent and other technical aspects as well...its just the composure that isn't working.

I agree with you on the highlights hitting the wall to the left of the car, it is distracting. As for the sky, I didn't want to crop it out due to the reflection going across the hood and windshield.. if I had cropped it out, the reflection would have been even more distracting, at least here you can see why there is a somewhat distracting reflection on the car.

good point on the sky reflection...looking at it I agree you almost have to leave it in.

got rid of the highlight on the wall as best I could, and changed the color tone of the sky .

I rather like that last one! one last eensy item ;) you need to give the tall window sky the same treatment as the overhead. All this really makes the car standout. Here's this ultimate car in this shabby environment The contrast/juxtaposition is super. well done.

I would keep the original crop and have darken the surrounding.... This way the attention would have gone where it needs to be.