I feel like I repeat myself a lot, but I don't like the cropping, and big highlights in the background are always distracting. Our eyes are drawn to the brightest part of a photo. The yellow in the top image, and the egg-shaped oval in the bottom compete with your subject.
But I do like the poses and expressions. I'd try to squeeze some more shadow detail out of her hair. I always like texture in hair.
I dont mind background, but i do mind overprocessed skin ... not all around, but around eyebrows and under her eyes. I feel that skin lack details under her eyes and there is some wierd artefact above her eyebrow.
Im doing FS, but it still looks kinda overprocessed, dont know where I do wrong, what do you think that do it like that? Yes, i found out that thing with her eyebrown one day after when i look at it with fresh eyes :(
Love them. My only thing other than what the others have mentioned is that, on the first photo, try to get rid of the stretch lines going across the seam on her shoulder. She's clearly a curvy woman (and i love that) but it makes it look as though her top isn't well fitted. Other than that, fantastic work.
I feel like I repeat myself a lot, but I don't like the cropping, and big highlights in the background are always distracting. Our eyes are drawn to the brightest part of a photo. The yellow in the top image, and the egg-shaped oval in the bottom compete with your subject.
But I do like the poses and expressions. I'd try to squeeze some more shadow detail out of her hair. I always like texture in hair.
Will try to do the background less bright next time, thank you for your advice!
It's more about paying attention to what is behind your subject.
I dont mind background, but i do mind overprocessed skin ... not all around, but around eyebrows and under her eyes. I feel that skin lack details under her eyes and there is some wierd artefact above her eyebrow.
Other than that ... i love it.
Im doing FS, but it still looks kinda overprocessed, dont know where I do wrong, what do you think that do it like that? Yes, i found out that thing with her eyebrown one day after when i look at it with fresh eyes :(
Love them. My only thing other than what the others have mentioned is that, on the first photo, try to get rid of the stretch lines going across the seam on her shoulder. She's clearly a curvy woman (and i love that) but it makes it look as though her top isn't well fitted. Other than that, fantastic work.