I shoot this gorgeous girl last friday and I would like to share results with you. Any CC are welcomed so I can progress my skill even further.
She is pretty delicate person and loves to dance. She is not a professional model at all, yet more convincing than most of my "more professional" models I was working with. Pretty charming person.
Looks great!
The crop on the right is a little tight as it's clipping her clothes.
Also, I'm not sure if you had any better angles, but the blown out light in the background on the right is a bit distracting.
That underneath lighting though...
The shirt is blown out, the lighting is really flat, the bokeh isn't working because of everything blending in the back. The location doesn't fit the person or wardrobe.
Keep trying.
beautiful girl. I agree that a different angle of the shot could improve it. You have shown her beautiful eyes and face. A different angle and crop just above the dress may be a good option.