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Valle de Pineta — Three Images from Ordesa y Monte Perdido
Three images from a day in the Valle de Pineta, Ordesa y Monte Perdido National Park, Huesca.
Not quite sure of which one
I know it's just variations on a theme. But thoughts on which one is better than another? Maybe I'm just overthinking?
02561 . Vegas II
Sardinia . 2023
Photo: https://lightaffaire.com/all-my-links/?FS Model: Matea
End of coat season
Ady thrifted some faux fur and thought it'd be fun to shoot. She spend the afternoon with me and we shot several of her "furs". I hope you like this one.
Morning sun
Photo taken at small cave enter using one 120cm octa.
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Welcome! I think at this point you're simply struggling with finding a quality subject. Your composition is fine but no matter how well you photographed and Photoshoped this location, it's always going to look like a beginners shot.
I like to ask myself: "if anyone else was here in this location would they be able to take a similar shot" and in this instance I say yes, anyone with a cell phone camera would be able to take this exact shot and make it black and white.
I'd like to see you do something that required a bit more planning and post production.
thank you for your advice sir !!
I agree with Lee. The converging lines draw you right in but there's nothing there to look at once you're there. Something that breaks up the symmetry would help or something at the end of the bridge to look at.
thanks !!! i will definitely do that !!