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Hi, just wanted to throw a few shots of mine out there and see if I could get some feedback - First post

Hi there, I am a photographer based in London. I've been shooting for about 2 years and really enjoy portraiture. I've attached some images, feel free to leave some feedback! T

Thanks

Priyank

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They look great :)

Hey, I love the cropping on the first, second and fourth photo. The last image I think there may be too much space above the head with those bright light coming right out from behind her (Maybe a cool wide crop?). The third I am not a fan of, I think it's her make-up or maybe the retouch, but it looks over done on the face with no eye shadow. 1, 2, 4 and 5 look good and I think can be brought to another level in post.

Cheers buddy, your feedback is much appreciated! I'll play around with your suggestions and i'll keep these things in mind for future shoots.

These are great portraits.
I don't like the expression in the 2nd one compared to the others. I would have had her open the mouth slightly, up her chin a little, and a less piercing stare.
The 4th is my favorite, love the connexion.

Great shots. They would have been even better with a slight hint of fill on shots 1, 2 and 4. The shots are good natural light shots, but they just don't pop. I think the last shot is my favorite.

My favourite one is # 5 , with a little cropping , this is a Magazine cover or an ad for the perfume or so as is .. very nice
then is # 1 and then is # 4 .

The first photo is very nice, maybe just some rim light on the hair would be nice. I'd also see what she looked like pulling the hair back that is closest to the camera so we can see her neck more. The second photo is nice but lacks a little interest. I might try to pull more expression out of her, or add hands around her face. In the third photo it's very pretty but for me she has a little too much white in her eyes, so maybe not turn her head so far to the side would help. I think the 4th one is really pretty, nice lighting, beautiful model. The last one is great, but I'd love to see here do something with her arms to give her a little more personality and interest. She's a little too square, but the lighting is really nice and I love the background.