Hey everyone, first time posting here. This is a newer genre of photography for me, and this shot comes from my most recent session. I'd love some CC from some experienced eyes here to see where I can improve. Thanks in advance, and happy new year!!!
Hi Rex,
I think you MUST improve your initiative to take the decisive picture with less textile...
Sorry, just a joke but I canot stop myself looking at model.... you have to play a bit with the light.
Haha, I'll do my best to work on my initiative there. :)
Rex,
take a look here and compare.
https://fstoppers.com/photo/32145
Ahh, believe I do indeed see what you're talking about with the lighting. I'll have to work on that.
Thanks for the help!!
I like the effect, perhaps enough light to just see the outline of the arms, but it is the pose around the neck and chin that looks strange, the chin tucked back is not as engaging as chin slightly forward to lengthen neck and reduce strained effect. But good work. Keep it up.
I only have two things. watch for the crop as you have lost a finger or two at the bottom and maybe have her not look so far around. keep the head in the same position but bring the eyes more into the frame more inline with her shoulder rather than over it.
Good job. Throw in some reflectors to control the light a bit more on the shadow side and use the light to sculpt the model more next time.
Stop clipping your blacks. xoxo