Well good job on your first shoot!!!!! Thats the start.. what i like about the picture is well... a lot of photographers in the beginning (including how I was) tend to get harsh shadows on their face, because we are more geared to getting the picture vs controlling the lighting when we first start I don't see that here so I got to hand it to you on that one.
The image is pretty crisp!
glad your using a off camera flash and not a on camera flash.
from the left part of the photo all the way to where the tree begins is kinda distracting it's taking away from the model, what i would do is if you want the tree in the picture to begin with that to the left so that you can still get her in the rule of thirds. that way the image focus will be on her.
The temperature of the shot seems kind of cold unless thats the look you was going for.
Now there is a harsh shadow on her leg, and on the tree which is identifying where you used the flash, maybe if you use a diffuser and tilled it to an angle to her that soft light will hit her so that the shadows wouldn't be so heavy on the tree and her leg. But im no flash expert I mainly use natural light
Other than that I think that you did a great job for your first photoshoot! Better then me and my first one keep up the good work!
Thank You, Joshua Barnes For Your Comment. :) :) :)
I'll Try To Improve Myself. Actually, This Photo Is Not My First Photoshoot. I Means First Shoot For Swimwear.
Well good job on your first shoot!!!!! Thats the start.. what i like about the picture is well... a lot of photographers in the beginning (including how I was) tend to get harsh shadows on their face, because we are more geared to getting the picture vs controlling the lighting when we first start I don't see that here so I got to hand it to you on that one.
The image is pretty crisp!
glad your using a off camera flash and not a on camera flash.
from the left part of the photo all the way to where the tree begins is kinda distracting it's taking away from the model, what i would do is if you want the tree in the picture to begin with that to the left so that you can still get her in the rule of thirds. that way the image focus will be on her.
The temperature of the shot seems kind of cold unless thats the look you was going for.
Now there is a harsh shadow on her leg, and on the tree which is identifying where you used the flash, maybe if you use a diffuser and tilled it to an angle to her that soft light will hit her so that the shadows wouldn't be so heavy on the tree and her leg. But im no flash expert I mainly use natural light
Other than that I think that you did a great job for your first photoshoot! Better then me and my first one keep up the good work!
Thank You, Joshua Barnes For Your Comment. :) :) :)
I'll Try To Improve Myself. Actually, This Photo Is Not My First Photoshoot. I Means First Shoot For Swimwear.