Hi all, would very much like some CC on this shot.
I can see the background could do with a little retouch to make it white, besides that, what do you all think???
On the background i used two lights (shielded by V-flats)
Two V-flats with black side out towards the model.
And a single big softbox pointed downwards at the model, at my back.
I think the background is fine, just double check to make sure both sides are exposed the same. As long as it's lit consistently, I don't see a problem with it.
I do think her expression is a little weird, like a deer in headlights? Maybe have her look a little behind, above, or to the side of camera if you redo this. Just a few centimetersto the side of the lense can make big difference.
As said before, do some retouching on her hair. Not just on her forehead, but around the sides as well. Just enough to make it look a little less frizzy/messed
Great lighting. I can't decide if I love her expression though. It looks a little zoned out but at the same time I don't hate it.
Was her first time infront of the camera, we tried to work with a little squinch in the eyes, but it was hard hehe :-)
thank you Lee
Amazing portrait. Maybe I would have cleaned the stray hairs at the top of her forehead a little bit?
Thank you Pascal :-)
Yes i think so to, they are a bit tricky.
Looks a bit over exposed to me, what lighting did you use Daniel
On the background i used two lights (shielded by V-flats)
Two V-flats with black side out towards the model.
And a single big softbox pointed downwards at the model, at my back.
I think the background is fine, just double check to make sure both sides are exposed the same. As long as it's lit consistently, I don't see a problem with it.
I do think her expression is a little weird, like a deer in headlights? Maybe have her look a little behind, above, or to the side of camera if you redo this. Just a few centimetersto the side of the lense can make big difference.
As said before, do some retouching on her hair. Not just on her forehead, but around the sides as well. Just enough to make it look a little less frizzy/messed
Thank you Abi, it was very usefull without a doubt.