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Freedom

Me and my girlfriend went to the beach on 10th January

That was really unusual, because usually is really really cold

I asked her to jump, she is my muse :D

That's the results.

Maybe i should have putted a lower aperture, but i was not thinking as a photographer..

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The idea is nice, and the exposition of the image is nice too, it could use some work but it's already a good start.
For the framing, I would suggest moving her to the right to give more breathing room to your image. also the rocks in the background seems a bit out of place due to the framing of the image. The viewers eyes will be lured to them yet the abrupt end of horizon (notice we can't see the seascape in the back anymore) in the back makes it unnatural. It's a good photo, but it could be a great one too with some work.

U suggest to cut part of the picture over my signature? i think i didn't understand!! Sorry

For this image I would suggest removing the visible beach part at the bottom to give it a wider aspect.
The advice I gave earlier was actually for later shots you might take on the beach.

Cool photo, but I think her face is just a touch over exposed. Looks very white.

Yes, i think i have should have put camera at -0.3 or -0.7, actually i don't remember settings, i usually put it at -0.3 with aperture priority

I guess you did everything what i wanna see now. Great, congrats! ;)

Thanks :D

i put some bit of orange, i feel better now :D