Hard to say. I really like the tonality and structure. The difficulty I have is that the more I look at it, the less i see a structure and the more it becomes an abstract in its own right. I wouldn't judge it as a representative of the subject but more a comment on human constructs. Which all sounds a bit late night BBC2, but I think it's a fine piece.
Yes i suppose it is an abstract in its construction and a statement on modern design , still a work in progress thanks for that comment Mike , i think the black square at the bottom is maybe a distraction
Hard to say. I really like the tonality and structure. The difficulty I have is that the more I look at it, the less i see a structure and the more it becomes an abstract in its own right. I wouldn't judge it as a representative of the subject but more a comment on human constructs. Which all sounds a bit late night BBC2, but I think it's a fine piece.
Yes i suppose it is an abstract in its construction and a statement on modern design , still a work in progress thanks for that comment Mike , i think the black square at the bottom is maybe a distraction