Hi guys, im kind of new in retouching think, and photography, the image i upload, i edit today, but i dont know i feel that is missing something, i dont know if its about the composition of the photo, tones, or whatever, but i think i am not evaluate the pics properly, like if dont get what should i do to make it more interesting! I always look and think that its not bad, but could be much better! Like if i try to find my thing, the think that gona make me say "this is it"! Hope can have some advise from u guys!
I think it's an interesting shot, not sure how you got to use a bowling alley or if I'd be brave enough to even try it hah. I think your crop is what's throwing it off, you're losing sort of random parts of her body. Your 'horizon' seems off a smidge as well, but that's probably secondary.
I like it but I'd agree that the crop is a bit weird and personally I would work on the color tone of the background vs. her... the floor and her skin/hair are pretty similar and almost getting lost. I would want to see her pop out a bit more from the background with something other than just a brighter exposure and sharper focus. It's a cool idea and I'd like to see more from the set.