Hi Seva -- overall a really good job! A couple of things might have improved it: main issue I have is the light on the girls' face -- she has "raccoon eyes". Not very appealing. Also the shadows on her face show lines each side of her nose and under it. Your key light was too steep.
Your edge lights would help the mood if you had gelled them to suggest the city light colors behind them. And made them stronger. The violin should have been tilted toward the key a bit more and held parallel with the man's other arm to complete your design.
Hi Seva -- overall a really good job! A couple of things might have improved it: main issue I have is the light on the girls' face -- she has "raccoon eyes". Not very appealing. Also the shadows on her face show lines each side of her nose and under it. Your key light was too steep.
Your edge lights would help the mood if you had gelled them to suggest the city light colors behind them. And made them stronger. The violin should have been tilted toward the key a bit more and held parallel with the man's other arm to complete your design.
The compositing is great -- nice work!