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Wedding Before And After

A little feed back would be great!!

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David Mawson April 22, 2017 - 5:55 pm

I love the before... but it's much too David Lynch for a wedding! So good call on the tonality change, given the context.

Maybe itś just me, but protruding hair exactly aligned with the tip of the subject's nose is a problem - it looks like she's sprouting nose whiskers. And I'd the weird highlight on the nose - actually if you kill the highlight then the hair might not grab the eye so hard. Assuming this isn't just me to begin with...

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Pawel Witkowski April 23, 2017 - 4:22 am

I believe that I know what you're trying to get there, but I think photo is not suitable for this. On some photos you will not be able to add more life by changing saturation simply, especially if done in higher ISO where tonality is getting lost. Don't lose hope, for now on before looks better, but practice bit more and you will nail it.

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supamann-barnes April 24, 2017 - 11:52 am

Idk i think that the before is better the bottom makes it look as if a flash was on her heavy while the first one looks like a bride who is getting ready for the day. Its like a nervous tone to it. something all brides go through getting married commiting their life to someone for their whole life. The other one just look a bit two colorful it doesnt speak to me

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