The model is lovely and the lighting looks decent. The quality of the skin retouching doesn't look bad, but I personally do not care for the color toning (she looks gray, probably because the red channel was desaturated too much in her skin?) or the exposure (too dark for no reason). Her hair doesn't seem to match up with the rest of the image, it looks over saturated compared to her gray skin. The other thing I would do is crop the image so that the sleeve of her top at bottom right isn't there anymore - there's not enough of it to be interesting, and too much to be unnoticed. The curl of her hair coming up at the bottom of the frame in the center of her chest is also distracting and awkward. Hope this helps.
The model is lovely and the lighting looks decent. The quality of the skin retouching doesn't look bad, but I personally do not care for the color toning (she looks gray, probably because the red channel was desaturated too much in her skin?) or the exposure (too dark for no reason). Her hair doesn't seem to match up with the rest of the image, it looks over saturated compared to her gray skin. The other thing I would do is crop the image so that the sleeve of her top at bottom right isn't there anymore - there's not enough of it to be interesting, and too much to be unnoticed. The curl of her hair coming up at the bottom of the frame in the center of her chest is also distracting and awkward. Hope this helps.
Thank you very much for your analyse, everything is right, i will fix as well as i can
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