Beautiful girl!! Without knowing what you desire, I will make a few general comments. Some of these items may have been intentional.
The crop could be wider, allowing her full arm/elbow. There is a hotspot of light on her cheek and forehead. Not necessarily bad; again, what are you trying to achieve?
Her watch is in competition to her face and a bit of a distraction.
Overall, a pleasing photograph. Keep working and post more as you progress.
Beautiful girl!! Without knowing what you desire, I will make a few general comments. Some of these items may have been intentional.
The crop could be wider, allowing her full arm/elbow. There is a hotspot of light on her cheek and forehead. Not necessarily bad; again, what are you trying to achieve?
Her watch is in competition to her face and a bit of a distraction.
Overall, a pleasing photograph. Keep working and post more as you progress.
This is just a personal preference observation, so take it with a grain of salt. I'd lighten her eyes since the eye shadow keeps them from popping.