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Try to build a serie : what do you think ?

Hi,
I'm a french amateur photographer, I'm trying to build my first photography serie without means.
The theme without being able to name it, is the grace and the tulle fabric.
Each photo was taken at my home. Almost with the same setup. Both picture use a 48 inch octabox on left side and on the right a reflector or a strop box.
Please, let me know what you think of both photo and if it worth continuing ?

PS : Hope the english is not too bad !

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4 Comments

The right (the viewers left) hand/arm of the girl on the second photo is placed really weird...

Thank Matthijs Bettman for your answer. I didn't pay attention to her failling hand. Do you mean we could see something else ?

Definitely continue the series! I agree with Matthijs Bettman below on the hand placement. In both images the model holding the fabric onto them is distracting. Perhaps find a way to wrap them or attach it to their undergarments, if they are not nude beneath.

Thank John D, I take your advice.
I tried to tie the fabric with pliers but it did not hold. So the model had to hold it. I'll try to do better next time.