I love the use of natural light and her pose. You also nailed the clarity of the eyes. What I would like to see is her skin just a tad less smooth. In portraits for me, I like to see a bit of character in the skin. If the skins too smooth my mind is reminded of a highly realistic graphic novel art style, which is great if that's your intention. All in all I think its more than a solid photo and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
I also think the skin was oversoftened a little too much. I really like how the dark lines on the background form a frame for the model. The eyes are beautiful and the depth of field keeps her in focus. I like the pose. Beautiful photograph.
Massively overdone
I respect your opinion, but I don`t Agree with it!
I love the use of natural light and her pose. You also nailed the clarity of the eyes. What I would like to see is her skin just a tad less smooth. In portraits for me, I like to see a bit of character in the skin. If the skins too smooth my mind is reminded of a highly realistic graphic novel art style, which is great if that's your intention. All in all I think its more than a solid photo and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Thank You for your opinion Connor
I also think the skin was oversoftened a little too much. I really like how the dark lines on the background form a frame for the model. The eyes are beautiful and the depth of field keeps her in focus. I like the pose. Beautiful photograph.
Thank You for your opinion Steve
Not over done but awesome and very clear .
Thanks a lot Tracy