Take it for what its worth as I don't do a lot of portrait work, however, two things that I would love to see - (1) slight separation between the models left arm and body & (2) an alternative facial expression. It may be perfectly fine but something about the lips to me leaves me wanting to compare it to other available expressions. Not certain if that's good or bad...
Overall, great model & tones in the image!
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The models expression doesn't match the image mood, in my opinion. The pose works for me, the lighting is nice, but let down by her expression.
I think it's great. Yes, maybe a little space between her body and her left arm would have really enhanced her shape. But, those look like doors to me, and that look, that look is great...like, you coming in? Great shot.
I'm not a pro by any stretch. But, as it has been pointed out, separation between the model and the background could be pushed more. Either with a light source or distance from the background. Also, that background had pattern and symmetry, no? Try to include those in the composition.
I love the red on the deep green. Great colors!
Take it for what its worth as I don't do a lot of portrait work, however, two things that I would love to see - (1) slight separation between the models left arm and body & (2) an alternative facial expression. It may be perfectly fine but something about the lips to me leaves me wanting to compare it to other available expressions. Not certain if that's good or bad...
Overall, great model & tones in the image!
The models expression doesn't match the image mood, in my opinion. The pose works for me, the lighting is nice, but let down by her expression.
I think it's great. Yes, maybe a little space between her body and her left arm would have really enhanced her shape. But, those look like doors to me, and that look, that look is great...like, you coming in? Great shot.
I'm not a pro by any stretch. But, as it has been pointed out, separation between the model and the background could be pushed more. Either with a light source or distance from the background. Also, that background had pattern and symmetry, no? Try to include those in the composition.