Nikon D810 Nikkon 70-200 3 x SB910/SB800 Deep Octas 39" 27" Reflector Lastolite 39"gold/silver Home Made Gel (Blue/Red Sharpe)F4.0 1/160s ISO100 Main Light 1/16 Kicker 1/32 Background 1/16 Zoom 170mm
Nikon D810 Nikkon 70-200 3 x SB910/SB800 Deep Octas 39" 27" Reflector Lastolite 39"gold/silver Home Made Gel (Blue/Red Sharpe)F4.0 1/160s ISO100 Main Light 1/16 Kicker 1/32 Background 1/16 Zoom 170mm
Look, I don't want to bash on your images but it seems like you put more accent on the gear you have and use than on the quality of the final image. I feel the model is underexposed and the dark shadows on her neck and arms could have been filled more. If you look closely at her face, and people will do that because you shot with you almighty d810 (man you love your sharpness), it almost feels like it's furry and the excess quantity of makeup does not help you. In my opinion you should focus more on the retouching and less on detailing every single piece of equipment used.
too much make up on her facw plus the dark shadow above her eyes interfer