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Emily

Nikon D5500

I'm new to this group- would love some constructive criticism!

Thanks!

Bree
@phancyphoti on Instagram

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Beautiful, her eyes in first photo are great. You both did a great job. The paint(?) is a bit distracting as it gets thicker, I don't know why, maybe because it looks, placed, neatly, instead of smeared. Dare I say the paint does not have enough emotion! Ha! Nice job.

it seems that the white balance isn't consistent. Same backdrop, different colours

I think the emotion of the first two is wonderful and vulnerable. I don't even notice the paint on her fingers until I'm looking for it. I agree with Joseph that once I do start noticing it then it feels more like a distraction than a integral part of the image. If the last few had a Macbeth-like feeling of blood on her hands or something then I could run with that, I think.