That is an excellent set. Your tonal values and background separation are excellent, as is the photo styling. The skin tones are gorgeous. The first image pretty much leaves nothing to be improved.
The posing of the second image could be improved IMO. I'd like to see her fingers relaxed--such as seeing her fingertips emerging from her sleeves. As they are, the overall pose is one of defensiveness. She's protecting her heart and hear head, and my impression is that her hands are closed in defensiveness. If that is actually the intent, then that should flash in the eyes as well.
The third image would benefit from following the posing hack: Keep they eyes turned in the same direction as the nose. There is too much white and not enough of what we're really interested in about the eyes.
That is an excellent set. Your tonal values and background separation are excellent, as is the photo styling. The skin tones are gorgeous. The first image pretty much leaves nothing to be improved.
The posing of the second image could be improved IMO. I'd like to see her fingers relaxed--such as seeing her fingertips emerging from her sleeves. As they are, the overall pose is one of defensiveness. She's protecting her heart and hear head, and my impression is that her hands are closed in defensiveness. If that is actually the intent, then that should flash in the eyes as well.
The third image would benefit from following the posing hack: Keep they eyes turned in the same direction as the nose. There is too much white and not enough of what we're really interested in about the eyes.
Wow, this is great feedback. Thank you
Sorry, no constructive feed back here. I just simply like all 3.
i feel the same :)
much appreciated.