Opinions?

These are great for a first outing. There's a good balance between personality of the model and making the clothing the focus of the images (which is of course the whole point of fashion photography). My favorite image is the first one. There's something about either her pose or the slit in the skirt in the second that I don't like as much, and in the third I kind of can't really tell what she's doing with her body because of her scrunched up posture and all the patterns on the fabric. But those are just nitpicks, overall I'd say these are nice.