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My first post

First post in Fstoppers. There's some really big caliber shooters here, we can easily feel overwhelmed, but what place better to learn, right?
These are my latest portraits from a shoot I did

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no 1 I like the empty space on the left but it doesn't help the picture shift the model to the left, needs more space around the head and remove distracting piece of chair
no 2 shadow is all wrong and what's the line coming through the models head.
no 3 is better but more space around the head and watch the highlights on the cheek and nose would have been better with a Rembrandt style lighting