I will add a few things, the cropping could been better. I think the image would benefit if we saw her right arm completely. Tilting her head a bit to the back would brought more emotion and her neck would look much more nicer.
The third one I might be wrong, I think the leading lines created by the planks should been in the bottom of the shot leading our eyes to her instead of away. Also I don't think any attention was given to her hair.
I like the posing; Marc's comments are great. I'm thinking that some more dramatic lighting would add to this image, maybe more contrast. Yes, cropping that emphasizes the centrality of your subject would help.
PRETTY
Hi Sergey,
I will add a few things, the cropping could been better. I think the image would benefit if we saw her right arm completely. Tilting her head a bit to the back would brought more emotion and her neck would look much more nicer.
The third one I might be wrong, I think the leading lines created by the planks should been in the bottom of the shot leading our eyes to her instead of away. Also I don't think any attention was given to her hair.
Marc
Many thanks for your feedback, Marc!
I like the posing; Marc's comments are great. I'm thinking that some more dramatic lighting would add to this image, maybe more contrast. Yes, cropping that emphasizes the centrality of your subject would help.