All critiques welcome
Canon EOS R
1/1500, ISO 100
Sigma 85mm 1.4 @ f/2.8
Natural light.
I would welcome any suggestions!
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4 Comments
PRETTY
Hi Sergey,
I will add a few things, the cropping could been better. I think the image would benefit if we saw her right arm completely. Tilting her head a bit to the back would brought more emotion and her neck would look much more nicer.
The third one I might be wrong, I think the leading lines created by the planks should been in the bottom of the shot leading our eyes to her instead of away. Also I don't think any attention was given to her hair.
Marc
Many thanks for your feedback, Marc!
I like the posing; Marc's comments are great. I'm thinking that some more dramatic lighting would add to this image, maybe more contrast. Yes, cropping that emphasizes the centrality of your subject would help.