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Jamie Wable's picture

Nova Lisa

A couple of portraits, in various shops around Midtown, Atlanta, using a prism and a window. Critiques welcome and appreciated.

Canon 5D Mark IV
Canon 50mm 1.4
Triangular Prism

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3 Comments

interesting title, I like very much, in spite of the surrounding details, I am drawn to the subjects eyes, well done

Pose feels lacking. Like she needs to be posed more. Below are a couple of ideas that you could probably do in a shop. Just picture in color + window + prism.

https://i.pinimg.com/originals/0a/ba/d4/0abad41ca61176ecd1809b15b677b44b...
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https://i.pinimg.com/originals/eb/15/ab/eb15abb035ad4e137595a8f49c3b1557...
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Your second image looks like some mysterious fist landing an upper-cut. If you have to have a hand on her chin, try something softer like the below.

https://image.freepik.com/free-photo/young-woman-hand-chin-pose_23-21482...
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Lastly, watch out for the hair-ties on their wrist.

I greatly appreciate the tips and examples! The uppercut one made me laugh but when I looked at the pic again I can definitely see it.