I think the hands are the problem. They draw your eyes away from her face, try cropping them out (Down out of frame would have been even better), I think the top of the dress would have framed off the bottom. I like the light, maybe 1/3 less on the fill so the light drop off was more dramatic. I like the photo very much.
The tones creating a really nice filmic look - something I am still working on.
Thank you, Mike. Frankly speaking I am not satisfied by this shot.
For my own information, what are you not happy with.
I think the hands are the problem. They draw your eyes away from her face, try cropping them out (Down out of frame would have been even better), I think the top of the dress would have framed off the bottom. I like the light, maybe 1/3 less on the fill so the light drop off was more dramatic. I like the photo very much.
Thank you for your comment.