What’d you think? Haven’t posted here in 3 years!
Just wanted to capture the subject with the calm water behind her and also the color of the dress.
Just wanted to capture the subject with the calm water behind her and also the color of the dress.
Kalama Eagle Sculpture: Kevin Stone
Mr. Stones website: https://www.kevinstonemetalart.com/
Glad I was already in my car before the heavens opened. It went incredibly dark, but it didn't last for very long, and the sun was soon out again.
I just messed about with the photograph of a luscious, large green tree against a nice blue background with the clouds, but I decided that was boring, so this is what I did to it.
I'm going to be trying this again because I rather like the outcome of this on my lavender in the garden, which has finished for the summer now, so I couldn't go and do it again.
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I’m a beginner for portraits so more a viewer comment than anything else - overall I like this! I like the pose, helps create that sense of relaxation/calmness, and fits with the environment. My eye keeps getting drawn to that darker spot in the water - I’d have removed that. A couple of differences I probably would have done would be: leave a little more head room, as I feel it’s a little cramped with the hand just getting cut off slightly, and it looks to me like there’s a fair bit of grain in there, that I’m guessing would have been added in post? Not something I’ve experimented with but probably not my style and for this calm-type of shot, personally I think a smoother, clean image would have helped with that relaxed vibe more.
In addition to what was already suggested, I would have done a 3/4 shot instead of cropping through her butt. It would have given her a more sexier and flattering shape (similar to your “Sidewalks” photo) and showed off the fancy slip/dress.