The only thing I'm noticing is that the hair-light is a bit hotter than your key light (her shoulder seems a bit brighter than her face) and honestly this is only if I'm being nit-picky.
This is a great black & white shot though. Great tonal values across the whole spectrum.
Very nice, my eye is drawn to the palm of her hand more than to her face however, because it is facing directly towards the camera and is brighter than her face. Perhaps a reflector would have bounced more light up under the brim of her hat and lightened up her face some.
Great shot Patrick.
The only thing I'm noticing is that the hair-light is a bit hotter than your key light (her shoulder seems a bit brighter than her face) and honestly this is only if I'm being nit-picky.
This is a great black & white shot though. Great tonal values across the whole spectrum.
Thank you. Appreciate the feedback, more ways to improve. 😊
Very nice, my eye is drawn to the palm of her hand more than to her face however, because it is facing directly towards the camera and is brighter than her face. Perhaps a reflector would have bounced more light up under the brim of her hat and lightened up her face some.
Thank you, will work on it. Thanks again for the feedback.