Hi I did a portrait shoot and just wanted some feedback on what I could do better next time.
One thing that did annoy me is the light falling on his right hand from the flash. Does that annoy anyone else or am I nitpicking?
Thanks
Hi I did a portrait shoot and just wanted some feedback on what I could do better next time.
One thing that did annoy me is the light falling on his right hand from the flash. Does that annoy anyone else or am I nitpicking?
Thanks
Hey, that look like a cool spot, but to be honest, my eyes went straight to the framework of that building in the back. I think it's a combination of his dark clothes blending with what's behind him and a narrow aperture.
His pose feels very unnatural too. The rim light around his head is a bit much, maybe the sun is directly behind it?
It's a good starting point, but needs some work in my opinion :)
Hope to see another from you soon.
Thanks for the feedback! Yep I think you're absolutely right I should have directed the flash on him more instead of just his face. It would have helped separate him from the background.