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karen

Hi,
This is my first post please feel free to make comments, all critiques and advice are appreciated :)

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4 Comments

I would have flipped the perspective. We really want to see her eyes and that would put the side light source on her face, not her hair.

Just some thoughts....for what they are worth.

Craig

Thank you very much :)

I agree with Craig on the perspective but I would also like to add in that I feel as though we should be given at least an idea as to what it is she is looking at. I'm a fan of showing the environment around them or giving some sort of clue if they aren't looking at the camera.

Just a thought for later if you choose to use it :)

Thanks for taking the time to comment :)