I would really appreciate some feedback. I am not a birder but received advice to photograph birds in preparation for the fast approaching Diving Season during which I have a number of projects to complete. Please do provide feedback on any element of the photograph and how it could be improved. I must admit I was a little cynical regarding photographing birds but with the exception of the water (and the light problems it gives) the interaction with the subject is indeed very similar. Thanks in advance :)
Exposure and focus seems alright, I would mostly work on composition as it isn't very enticing. Look up stuff on the rule of thirds, golden rule etc to draw up some inspiration. Placing your subject dead-center like you did here mostly doesn't work out well composition-wise.
Daniel, Many thanks for the feedback much appreciated, I did try to get the eye on the 3rd but looking at it again I certainly see what you mean. Very helpful, Thank you
I agree with Daniel. Technically, you have a great image. Composition could use some help. When you put something dead center like this, I call it an "education shot" meaning this is the photo that goes next to the name in the textbook. (ie this is a ___)
Even though rule-breakers will give every reason not to follow some basic design principles, these rules are good to start with and THEN learn how to break them. I would try a crop that puts the bird in the upper right quarter of this image. There is a rule some call the 'rule of space' that essentially means giving your subject the space to do whatever it is they are doing. In this case, give this fellow some space to look into or fly off the branch into. It will create the drama for the viewer to wonder what he is looking at. Here is a quick example to see what you think. It's just a screen capture but you'll get the idea. Just a suggestion.
Best of luck with birds! They are tough! And, I hope you get a chuckle at the double feet in the example! ;)