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Great Barbet 2

# Cathleen Shea
# William Hunter

Modified as suggested. Please opine.

Best
Jai.

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Here's how I see the composition.

To me, the bird is a strong subject, it commands the attention. I placed the bird's eye on the upper right intersection of a rule-of-thirds grid.

This is a rough edit with a phone app.

Thanks lot for the guidance. Will do accordingly.

Here's your original... only with the tree branches removed.

There is quite a lot of background in this edit... which diminishes the power of the bird.

These are just edited to my tastes.