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Jan Christian Zimara's picture
Jan Christian Zimara

First steps in a new area of Photography

Hello your welcome to tell me your thoughts about the picture.
A Para133 as Main and white V-Flap to fill.

Thanks and have nice day
Best wishes from Germany :)

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Farbod Green's picture
Farbod Green

hello jan
i like the colors and light of the image, great job

but if you want to work on the retouch and some other things that comes to my mind, you can crop it again so she stand on the right side of the image, so there won't be some free space on the right, and also give her some "looking room" (which is a cinematic rule for cinematography) because her eyes are looking to the left side...
and about the retouch, i see some color cast around her lips and jaw, and also her fingers left behind on the retouch, you can work on that too.

[ here is the quick try i did to give you my ideas (except the fingers) ]
goodluck

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Darya Yakubovich's picture
Darya Yakubovich

Hi Jan,
I agree with Farbod, The light is good.
And I want you to pay attention on hand. Face and body have different colors but you need to minimize this otherness. A big mistake is a mourning border on the nails. Although It's a mistake of model, but better to retouch it.
Spots on the skin are more visible through channel mixer (soft light, monochrome).

In general, you are on the right way :)
Good works!

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Jan Christian Zimara's picture
Jan Christian Zimara

Thanks a lot for response. I will keep it in mind and rework the details and I also keep more attantion around the face.

Of course I'm struggling with the colors and Hands every time while I fix it I lost a natural feeling. May I have to try it more often to get comfortable with fixing hands.

The cinematic view is an interesting point I've never heard of so I check it out...Google helps :D

I've not used the channel mixer (soft light, monochrome) before. So now I'll play a bit...

Thanks a lot!

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