I think you did a really nice job with the retouching. The crop of the photo doesn't bother me, but a couple of things stick out - for one, the red strap at the bottom left of the photo has no context and should have been removed as it's super distracting; two, her mouth.... I really hate to say it but it's open just a bit too wide, leaving me with an unflattering visual image of a certain type of inflatable toy. (I'm trying to be circumspect here.) Either that, or it looks like she was caught in the middle of saying something and wasn't happy about it. But your edit looks great. Hope this helps
I think you did a really nice job with the retouching. The crop of the photo doesn't bother me, but a couple of things stick out - for one, the red strap at the bottom left of the photo has no context and should have been removed as it's super distracting; two, her mouth.... I really hate to say it but it's open just a bit too wide, leaving me with an unflattering visual image of a certain type of inflatable toy. (I'm trying to be circumspect here.) Either that, or it looks like she was caught in the middle of saying something and wasn't happy about it. But your edit looks great. Hope this helps