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Had to share... Too excited

I just thought I'd share a shot from yesterday that I fell in love with. I'd really love to hear if anyone has some critiques though!

Thank you for your time!
Caroline
@carolinemillerphotography

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I like the idea, but a couple of things jump out at me... the light on her seems quite flat and almost underexposed compared to the rest of the scene. Her shadow on the glass over to the right is distracting. I would have maybe shot from a lower angle, because in this pose even though she is clearly a beautiful girl in great shape, she looks a bit compressed and shorter than she actually is. I'm not sure what the flap of fabric is behind her hand-- I assume some sort of skirt on the suit maybe?-- but it might look better if it wasn't there, or if there was more of it so you could see what the piece actually is. And in that vein, there is a piece of the suit that bumps out from her left breast that seems odd. Again, I'm assuming this is the construction of the garment, but it leaves me confused as to what exactly it's supposed to do.

Overall I think it's a nice shot but just suffers a little bit from these things, and could be a great shot. But that's just my opinion. :)