I'm still growing in the art myself. But, the picture on the left could have been helped by zooming in just a little bit more on the model. That object in front of her is distracting. Also, maybe bringing down the ambient slightly and brightening her. I do like the contrast here between soft beauty and rugged surroundings. The photo on the right could be improved by the same thing: brighten the model a little more. Maybe let us see a little more of those leading lines on the background.
I'm still growing in the art myself. But, the picture on the left could have been helped by zooming in just a little bit more on the model. That object in front of her is distracting. Also, maybe bringing down the ambient slightly and brightening her. I do like the contrast here between soft beauty and rugged surroundings. The photo on the right could be improved by the same thing: brighten the model a little more. Maybe let us see a little more of those leading lines on the background.