Hello there,
I will start by saying that I am at the beginning with fashion photography but I enjoy every step that I take.
I hope this photo is a step into the right direction. I am waiting for your comments and critique.
First steps into fashion shoots
I like the color work.
Lighting, color and composition are all good. "Model" looks bored or irritated and has lackluster posing, tense mouth, and sunglasses covering her face in a way that doesn't seem to add anything to the photo.
All in all this does not look like fashion photography, it looks like a snapshot taken while traveling but with really good lighting and color toning.
your comment was very spot on it would've been a great photo with a better model
great color grade :)
Thank you all for the comments and I must agree with Sennia. I will keep that in mind for the next shoot. This was realy hellpful.