The pose and idea has potential. The first thing I noticed was the wisp of hair blowing on the camera left side of her head. Very distracting. I agree that your model appears tense. Overall, I like it.
Maybe give the model a reason to be here. Its a nice location and good model I just don't have a reason to believe in this moment. This is something that many photos on this site suffer. If you are looking for fantasy then it possible has not gone far enough. You seem to be a good photographer but what is going to make this shot exceptional?
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Caroline, sorry to say, but the makeup is inadequate...
PANTS!
Just kidding... Love the photo, but you might try cropping it closer. It also looks like the subject is a little under exposed.
Good job....but the model is under exposed and she is not looking relaxed.
The pose and idea has potential. The first thing I noticed was the wisp of hair blowing on the camera left side of her head. Very distracting. I agree that your model appears tense. Overall, I like it.
Maybe give the model a reason to be here. Its a nice location and good model I just don't have a reason to believe in this moment. This is something that many photos on this site suffer. If you are looking for fantasy then it possible has not gone far enough. You seem to be a good photographer but what is going to make this shot exceptional?
Caroline, sorry to say, but the makeup is inadequate...
Good fun shot, but try more light on the centre of attention "model" and less on background. Little more intent from the model.