I like the pose and use of window backlight. I agree with the comment on the body position. I also find the the right hand to have the fingers too spread out. A softer hand showing the side of the hand instead of the back might have softened it. I also try to minimize having the shoulder point directly at the viewer. It tends to emphasize the shoulder instead of the cleavage. Having her twist a little from the waist up might have changed it enough (and also stretched out her waist to minimize that fold.. I think the lighting is good and the "S" in her body works. I like the highlights in her hair too.
I like the pose and use of window backlight. I agree with the comment on the body position. I also find the the right hand to have the fingers too spread out. A softer hand showing the side of the hand instead of the back might have softened it. I also try to minimize having the shoulder point directly at the viewer. It tends to emphasize the shoulder instead of the cleavage. Having her twist a little from the waist up might have changed it enough (and also stretched out her waist to minimize that fold.. I think the lighting is good and the "S" in her body works. I like the highlights in her hair too.