Recent lingerie shoot. I decided to get a bit creative by incorporating a gel. This scene was shot with three AD360 speedlites (1 soft bank, 1 socked beauty dish and 1 gelled).
I like it Dean. The filter is a nice touch. The only thing that caught my eye (a little) was her left hand. It looks a little too much like she's digging her fingers into her hair. Her right hand is perfect... great soft hand showing us the best part of the hand. Also, I'd like to see a little more lower body twist (think an "S") with a little arch to the back. Great shot. :-)
The shot is good. I am fairly new to this site. I have had a passion for photography for twenty years. I have never had the opportunity to capture this form of photography. The model is beautiful. The body position is very good. The model's left hand is positioned incorrectly. The lighting gel has given the model an orange/yellow tint. The bed is too small. It appears as though she will fall off and the linen is all wrinkled. Any good image tells a story in one way or another. thank you for sharing this image. Continue to keep up the good work.
Good pose by your muse. The yellow is a bit too much, I mean warmth is good but you can control it by adjusting your color balance in Photoshop. One thing I'd learn over the years is to capture the model entire body, don't crop the feet or knees so much within the camera. I know some times you'll get a good shot where the feet, knees, or arm is out the picture. It's not the end of the world, but there ways to by pass that by being creative. :-) I do like this shot though. Keep shooting homie! :-)
Thanks for comments / feedback. Everyone brought up some good points. However, the yellow tint was intentional (some will like and other will not). As far as the bed size is concerned you have to work with what you have at times. The hand in the hair I would agree it does will a bit off. Lastly, the cropping of the feet and knee was intentional as well. Overall both the model and myself were very pleased with outcome.
I like it Dean. The filter is a nice touch. The only thing that caught my eye (a little) was her left hand. It looks a little too much like she's digging her fingers into her hair. Her right hand is perfect... great soft hand showing us the best part of the hand. Also, I'd like to see a little more lower body twist (think an "S") with a little arch to the back. Great shot. :-)
The shot is good. I am fairly new to this site. I have had a passion for photography for twenty years. I have never had the opportunity to capture this form of photography. The model is beautiful. The body position is very good. The model's left hand is positioned incorrectly. The lighting gel has given the model an orange/yellow tint. The bed is too small. It appears as though she will fall off and the linen is all wrinkled. Any good image tells a story in one way or another. thank you for sharing this image. Continue to keep up the good work.
Good pose by your muse. The yellow is a bit too much, I mean warmth is good but you can control it by adjusting your color balance in Photoshop. One thing I'd learn over the years is to capture the model entire body, don't crop the feet or knees so much within the camera. I know some times you'll get a good shot where the feet, knees, or arm is out the picture. It's not the end of the world, but there ways to by pass that by being creative. :-) I do like this shot though. Keep shooting homie! :-)
Thanks for comments / feedback. Everyone brought up some good points. However, the yellow tint was intentional (some will like and other will not). As far as the bed size is concerned you have to work with what you have at times. The hand in the hair I would agree it does will a bit off. Lastly, the cropping of the feet and knee was intentional as well. Overall both the model and myself were very pleased with outcome.