This model is great to work with. She's up for just about anything (cept NSFW). Anyway this is from a shoot where we did a number of "looks". This was just a fun concept and her eyes make it all work.
Afraid it doesn't really work for me for the following reasons....
1. Due to the crop her arms/face feel "pressed" up against the side of the frame.
2. The pose - specifically the L shape of the knee means that, in order to keep her feet in the shot you have included a large empty area on the top/right. I find my eye going to the ornate bedhead instead of the model.
3. The cramped left and empty right make the whole image unbalanced.
4. the bedside light sticking out of her back/belly is distracting.
Afraid it doesn't really work for me for the following reasons....
1. Due to the crop her arms/face feel "pressed" up against the side of the frame.
2. The pose - specifically the L shape of the knee means that, in order to keep her feet in the shot you have included a large empty area on the top/right. I find my eye going to the ornate bedhead instead of the model.
3. The cramped left and empty right make the whole image unbalanced.
4. the bedside light sticking out of her back/belly is distracting.
5. Strange red glow behind the bed bottom left.
Do like the hair, pose, colour and lighting.