I like your picture and think the model is beautiful. a 90degree profile for the face is most often not flattering. I know you wanted to showcase the Tat on the back but the fact is when you have a photo with a beautiful girl 's face showing in it, that face should be perfectly presented. Need more favorable lighting on the face.: a perfect focus on the eyes with a catch light; a hair/rim light; some expression from the lady; lift the right elbow to stop the back from looking so broad. Good job- technically pretty good but need some jazz, pop, interest, attitude or feelings, glamour. Lets see the small of her back, as is, she has no shape. a little fanny showing or side view of the breast would not hurt.
hope you did not take offense. I go overboard in reviews. but always try to be constructive. I ONLY make a comment if I think the photo is good to start with.
I like your picture and think the model is beautiful. a 90degree profile for the face is most often not flattering. I know you wanted to showcase the Tat on the back but the fact is when you have a photo with a beautiful girl 's face showing in it, that face should be perfectly presented. Need more favorable lighting on the face.: a perfect focus on the eyes with a catch light; a hair/rim light; some expression from the lady; lift the right elbow to stop the back from looking so broad. Good job- technically pretty good but need some jazz, pop, interest, attitude or feelings, glamour. Lets see the small of her back, as is, she has no shape. a little fanny showing or side view of the breast would not hurt.
thank you. will keep that in mind.
hope you did not take offense. I go overboard in reviews. but always try to be constructive. I ONLY make a comment if I think the photo is good to start with.
Honestly, I am taking this very seriously and positively. I have learned from what you have said. Thank you so much.
good luck, Dan