All, please check out my first attempt at head shots in the DP Style. I really would like some feed back of any kind so as to improve my skills. Also please check out my web page at www.laithstevensphotography.com again really looking for some feed back so comment away please. It was an outdoor portrait shoot with an amateur model (Cole S) with a 60cm x 60cm softbox and Godox TT685C Speedlight and Olympus FL 600r as a kicker. Cameras were my trusty Olympus OMD EM-1 and new Canon 700D (just checking out DSLR)..
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2,3 and 4 are your best IMO here. You nail a character and personality here. The first one def needs more light in her face. The others i love the expressions, great shots, but mayb not the best. Like i said 2,3, and 4 are done really well
Christian Lampe - Thanks so much for the feedback it is much appreciated, it really helps I find to try and get the opinion of others as I get a bit too wrapped up in things. Again really appreciated mate, thanks.
I like #3 , yellow background is distracting , too strong in light. just fine if convert into black and white.
Thanks for the feedback mate, I was going for a Dylan Patrick Style head shot so trying to get some color in the background. But it is a little distracting. Thanks for your input.