Isaac Singleton's picture

IMANI - Constructive critiques welcome.

Sony a7riii
Sony gmaster 24-70mm f2.8
ISO - 800
Single flash approximately 18 inches from model

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Tyler Finley's picture

This is an awesome shot. I love the lighting and the background. If anything I would say maybe a rim light of sorts to pull her off the dark background a little bit but it's not really needed at all. Maybe fix some flyaway hairs? all minimal and me just nit picking. Better than I have been able to do myself haha. I did want to see what it would look like with a tighter crop so I hope you don't mind that I tried this. keep it up. Love it!

I love the lighting and her expression. I too would like to see a hair light of some kind because she is falling into that dark background.

Gerardo D. Duran Jr.'s picture

About the original cropping! To me, she is stepping out of the shadows, in to my light.

Bernd Stoeckl's picture

Very nice portrait though with the totally black background I would crop it more as it does not add to the scenery.