From this pose, have her turn to her right about 1/8 of a turn, but still look at the camera. Maybe lower the saturation on her lips just a bit. Lovely lady!
Overall color, exposure and focus of the model is very good. The pole to the left in the picture is a little bit distracting.
It's very minor but there's a strand of hair running down her left eye to her mouth.
I would pull back on the eyes a little bit and check the blending of shadow to light from the whites to iris. Also, I would try to even the lips a little. there is a smudge that is really distracting to me.
From this pose, have her turn to her right about 1/8 of a turn, but still look at the camera. Maybe lower the saturation on her lips just a bit. Lovely lady!
Overall color, exposure and focus of the model is very good. The pole to the left in the picture is a little bit distracting.
It's very minor but there's a strand of hair running down her left eye to her mouth.
I would pull back on the eyes a little bit and check the blending of shadow to light from the whites to iris. Also, I would try to even the lips a little. there is a smudge that is really distracting to me.