Question - is this direct, on-camera flash? If so, get that light off the camera if possible. I know sometimes that's tough, especially at events where they want pictures but don't want to see any trace of a photographer, but if you can move the light, you can get much more interesting effects. Second, she looks a little annoyed to me - applying some of Peter Hurley's techniques to pull some more/different expression out of her would probably get you a better shot.
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Hi Lee.
Don has touched on a couple of really great points here.
I'd like to suggest that picking up a 36" Octagonal softbox, as well as a similar size reflector will transform your control of light on the face. They take a bit of practice, but are worth their weight in gold.
I had a friend sit for me several Saturday mornings in a row while I sorted this out. Gave me heaps more confidence with the rig.
If you're unsure, buy a couple of cheapies and have a go. Try Craigs List or similar. Plenty of used gear there that's just perfect for this. If you like 'em, then get a really good octa.They last way way longer than the cheap ones and are a joy to use.
Cheers
I don't like that you cropped her hair and the light looks really harsh. Also I'm not quite getting her position, is she leaning while standing or sitting on a chair?
Question - is this direct, on-camera flash? If so, get that light off the camera if possible. I know sometimes that's tough, especially at events where they want pictures but don't want to see any trace of a photographer, but if you can move the light, you can get much more interesting effects. Second, she looks a little annoyed to me - applying some of Peter Hurley's techniques to pull some more/different expression out of her would probably get you a better shot.
Hi Lee.
Don has touched on a couple of really great points here.
I'd like to suggest that picking up a 36" Octagonal softbox, as well as a similar size reflector will transform your control of light on the face. They take a bit of practice, but are worth their weight in gold.
I had a friend sit for me several Saturday mornings in a row while I sorted this out. Gave me heaps more confidence with the rig.
If you're unsure, buy a couple of cheapies and have a go. Try Craigs List or similar. Plenty of used gear there that's just perfect for this. If you like 'em, then get a really good octa.They last way way longer than the cheap ones and are a joy to use.
Cheers
I don't like that you cropped her hair and the light looks really harsh. Also I'm not quite getting her position, is she leaning while standing or sitting on a chair?
She was standing, but leaning on a bar stool.