Obviously these things are to taste, but first headshot I would go tighter, and less contrasty (no shadow of the nose), using a fill in the other side.
the second, I would fix the shadow in the background (left), it is something that draws attention.
Terms of expression, I would either ask to close mouth completely or try to make her laugh and shoot a few, see if you get something genuine.
Nice shots! The second is my favorite. I would like to have seen just a tiny bit more light on the front/right side of her hair. Something else to play with is Peter Hurley’s “hold the sub” technique.
Nothing to say but excellent. Good job.
Obviously these things are to taste, but first headshot I would go tighter, and less contrasty (no shadow of the nose), using a fill in the other side.
the second, I would fix the shadow in the background (left), it is something that draws attention.
Terms of expression, I would either ask to close mouth completely or try to make her laugh and shoot a few, see if you get something genuine.
Nice shots! The second is my favorite. I would like to have seen just a tiny bit more light on the front/right side of her hair. Something else to play with is Peter Hurley’s “hold the sub” technique.