disclaimer: I have never done head shots before. VERY new to the photography game and do not have expensive gear.
HOWEVER. I'm passionate and would love to hear any constructive feedback. You do not have to be nice just to be nice, that's not what I'm here for. ;)
Thanks so much!
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Canon T5i
50mm 1.4
If you want specifics on settings I can give them per photo.
Technically they all look pretty good, though all the black is a bit overwhelming. In no3 all the stuff above her head is a bit distracting, same for the orange in no 4. The model is a real natural beauty beyond doubt but looks a bit too posed and not relaxed, but what was your intention? What were you trying to say. In my opinion when it comes to portraits too much is made of kit and not enough about what’s in the photographers mind. If I were you shoot with her again, ask her to dress in a less dominating outfit, something a bit plainer. The shot should be about her and not what she is wearing. I would like to see her in a tighter crop so we can see and appreciate her natural beauty. When shooting with her again give her something to think about to provoke a range of emotions, and see what works. Good luck and I can’t wait too see the results.
Thanks so much! Really appreciate the thorough feed back!
What you have to remember it’s only my opinion, and it should be taken with a pinch of salt. Though I do think you have a winning model there.
Hi Sharon,
Nice first try!
As Eric said in the second and third there's too much negative space above her head, easily fixed, just crop the images in a different ratio like 4 x 5 or 3 x 4.
On the first and last one, mind you I'm looking at those on my phone but it gives the impression she's only a torso, not enough separation between her skirt and the background. I'm not sure if you had some lighting or just available light but it could be fixed by adding a reflector or a light source behind her, play with the placement until you are satisfied with the result. It could be fixed in post too to some extent using dodging and burning but requires some expertise.
There's more you have to learn like paying attention to hair, be more conscious about how you compose so you don't crop out the feet like in the fifth image.
Overall you did a nice job, you just need some practise and maybe a reflector or another source of light.
I hope this helps,
Marc