Hello everyone, I'm David Allen Smith and currently located in North Carolina. I've spent the last 12 years in the military and now I'm in the process of getting out. I want to get back into photography full time, but I also do skydiving instruction and photo/video part time so I'll have to balance the two.
Anyway, here's a headshot!
The model looks great.....though I’m not so sure about the composition, the visually strong central arm and hand visually dominate. The side light/ rim light appears to be on the side rather that the rear of the head giving that side hot spot that again leads the eye away from her eyes that should be the central focus. Additionally the very tight crop through her hair at the top and shoulder at the side of the frame looks a bit uncomfortable. She is a great looking model, shoot with her again, modify your lighting and give her a bit more space in the frame.